Friday, April 13, 2012

Go Read

Well, I'm tossing in the old keyboard. Noir doesn't get any better than this!
http://www.shotgunhoney.net/2012/04/the-things-we-do-for-love-by-patti-abbott.html

2 comments:

Manuel Royal said...

Not bad. Second person present tense should seldom be pulled out of the bag; but it works here.

sandra seamans said...

Short stories allow a writer to use what doesn't always work in novels. And yes, it does work wonderfully in Patti's story.